Post by Jordan Mercer on Sept 27, 2013 17:06:25 GMT -5
A blank stare.
That was the only response Evelyn had originally given him. After the discussion with Felicia and Lilka, and perhaps as a result of Lilka's chosen residency, he had decided to tell Evelyn about his ability and how he had been using it. Evelyn was, by most accounts, his girlfriend, although he had seldom thought of her as such. But she deserved to know the truth. It would be difficult to tell her, he knew, and difficult for her to accept. They would have to work through it. But they would, he was certain, and they would be okay.
So he had returned to New York and told her. He had described his ability in full, and he had explained how he had used it with her. How he had manipulated her into always thinking well of him, no matter how he treated her; how he had controlled her through the power of suggestion, how so many of the choices she thought she had made had not been entirely hers at all.
She had watched him as he spoke, nodding very slightly from time to time, and at other times just looking at him very closely, as though reading his lips, or as though attempting to see into his heart. Had he done this before his meeting with Felicia, she would have found nothing there. Now, at least, he felt a bit of remorse. He knew what he had done was wrong, and that she had deserved better. He said as much, as his explanation drew to a close; and her only response to that had been a blank stare.
"Evelyn?" he asked quietly once too much time had passed in silence.
She cleared her throat a bit, looking down as she did. "I, um. That's… I don't know."
He stepped toward her. It was an erroneous move; she had been sitting, which meant she now had to look up at him. He did think to take her hand, though, and squeeze it very gently. "I understand if you want to leave. If… you never want to see me again. I'll understand."
"It's not that." She shook her head. "Not really. I just… it's so much."
"I know." He sat next to her on the sofa. The room had become unfamiliar to him, in the time he had been away. Somehow, although Evelyn had made little change to her apartment in that time. "I don't expect you to process it all at once. It'll take time. We'll take time."
She looked at him again; he noticed that her eyes looked clouded, bleary. "Did you love me, Jordan?"
Later, Jordan would realize the significance of her phrasing there. Did, as opposed to do. She had marked the conversation as an end to something even before he told her that it was. She had been observant, and thoughtful enough not to make her observations known. Yet he would wonder whether things could have been different if one of them had approached the matter just a little bit differently.
The answer came not in words; it was in the pause, the formation of his lips without making a sound before he did reply. "Yes, Evelyn. Not nearly as well as you deserved. I didn't know how to show it. I have to learn it. But I will."
She nodded slowly. Another early observation. She had realized that, even after all his explanations and all his promises, he was still lying to her.
"Will you be patient with me? I don't…." He knew what the sentence should have been, what he wanted it to be: I don't want to do this alone. But his pride made him swallow those words, and offer a very different set: "…I'd like you to stick with me."
"I will." Her voice was faint, but the smile she gave him was reassuring, and he was able to give her a reassuring smile in return. Then he kissed her, and they set about making dinner, just as they had so often before. She was quieter than usual, he noted, but, given all he had just told her, that was to be expected.
That was the only response Evelyn had originally given him. After the discussion with Felicia and Lilka, and perhaps as a result of Lilka's chosen residency, he had decided to tell Evelyn about his ability and how he had been using it. Evelyn was, by most accounts, his girlfriend, although he had seldom thought of her as such. But she deserved to know the truth. It would be difficult to tell her, he knew, and difficult for her to accept. They would have to work through it. But they would, he was certain, and they would be okay.
So he had returned to New York and told her. He had described his ability in full, and he had explained how he had used it with her. How he had manipulated her into always thinking well of him, no matter how he treated her; how he had controlled her through the power of suggestion, how so many of the choices she thought she had made had not been entirely hers at all.
She had watched him as he spoke, nodding very slightly from time to time, and at other times just looking at him very closely, as though reading his lips, or as though attempting to see into his heart. Had he done this before his meeting with Felicia, she would have found nothing there. Now, at least, he felt a bit of remorse. He knew what he had done was wrong, and that she had deserved better. He said as much, as his explanation drew to a close; and her only response to that had been a blank stare.
"Evelyn?" he asked quietly once too much time had passed in silence.
She cleared her throat a bit, looking down as she did. "I, um. That's… I don't know."
He stepped toward her. It was an erroneous move; she had been sitting, which meant she now had to look up at him. He did think to take her hand, though, and squeeze it very gently. "I understand if you want to leave. If… you never want to see me again. I'll understand."
"It's not that." She shook her head. "Not really. I just… it's so much."
"I know." He sat next to her on the sofa. The room had become unfamiliar to him, in the time he had been away. Somehow, although Evelyn had made little change to her apartment in that time. "I don't expect you to process it all at once. It'll take time. We'll take time."
She looked at him again; he noticed that her eyes looked clouded, bleary. "Did you love me, Jordan?"
Later, Jordan would realize the significance of her phrasing there. Did, as opposed to do. She had marked the conversation as an end to something even before he told her that it was. She had been observant, and thoughtful enough not to make her observations known. Yet he would wonder whether things could have been different if one of them had approached the matter just a little bit differently.
The answer came not in words; it was in the pause, the formation of his lips without making a sound before he did reply. "Yes, Evelyn. Not nearly as well as you deserved. I didn't know how to show it. I have to learn it. But I will."
She nodded slowly. Another early observation. She had realized that, even after all his explanations and all his promises, he was still lying to her.
"Will you be patient with me? I don't…." He knew what the sentence should have been, what he wanted it to be: I don't want to do this alone. But his pride made him swallow those words, and offer a very different set: "…I'd like you to stick with me."
"I will." Her voice was faint, but the smile she gave him was reassuring, and he was able to give her a reassuring smile in return. Then he kissed her, and they set about making dinner, just as they had so often before. She was quieter than usual, he noted, but, given all he had just told her, that was to be expected.