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 Michael Harris (WIP)
« Thread Started on Nov 17, 2010, 1:51pm »

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Full Name- Michael Harris
Gender- Male
Age- 43
Date of Birth- (when was your character born?)
Sexual Orientation- Heterosexual
Location- California
Celebrity Claim- Michael doesn't really have a Celebrity Claim. Although I'm using the appearance of Marcus Corvinus (Underworld Character) in his Hybrid form.
What should we call you?- Alessia
Play anyone else?- No not yet
Have You Read the Rules?- (have you?)




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Personality-
(at least 3 GOOD paragraphs describing your character's personality)

Likes-

  • Flying
  • The Hunt




Dislikes-







Strengths-

  • Hunting
  • Planning things out




Weaknesses-

  • Children





Skills-

  • Tracking



Flaws-









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Abilities/Powers/Skills-

Michael has the ability of Perfect Predatory Transformation. This ability has permanently evolved his body into the perfect killing-machine. He now takes on the appearance of what appears to be a Half-Bat,Half-Man. Unlike bats, his eye sight and hearing are just enhanced, he isn't blind. He's now grown large wings that can retract into his back, the wing part can fold up into the bone that connects the wing to the body so that he can use his wings as weapons. He's also grown claws. His body has taken on a more darker appearance, including his eyes that have gone completely black. His senses are all enhanced, along with his eyes that now are capable of seeing in the dark. Even his strength,speed,endurance and stamina are all enhanced. His body now isn't Omnivorous like normal humans, his digestive system is now only capable of taking in raw flesh. His natural instincts have somewhat changed to that of a bat. He prefers to sleep in dark areas in the day and at night he hunts or does whatever else he needs to do. His ability has warped his mind into a killer, he feels little regret about his killing.

Michael also has his secondary power called Consumptive Spontaneous Regeneration. This is very much similar to most Regenerators although he must feed on flesh of either human or animal in order to keep his Regeneration active. He's capable of regenerating the most harmful wounds such as gunshots but if he was to lose a limb or a wing, it would take alot of hunting and many days to grow it back.

Limits-
(Everyone has limits, what's your character's)

Michael's ability of Perfect Predatory Transformation has changed his eating habits to that of a Predator. He now is incapable of staying healthy by consuming plants, he must feed on Raw Flesh. If he was to consume vegetables or fruits, he would puke it all out including the other flesh he's consumed. All of his enhanced attributes such as his senses and his strength aren't as powerful as someone who has that ability as their natural Superhuman Ability. (example: He's incapable of beating someone with Superhuman Strength in a Arm Wrestling Contest because his strength isn't as powerful as the other Superhuman.) Although he's capable of flying by using his wings, he isn't as fast as someone with Flying as their own ability. Michael is also incapable of turning back into his human form, this is impossible for him. If someone that has the ability to shapeshift others was to attempt to change Michael's appearance, his body would force his appearance back to the monstrous bat-like creature it is now.

Michael's second ability of Consumptive Spontaneous Regeneration is incapable of regenerating his head back if he was to be decapitated. He also has the usual spot in the back of his head that would “kill” him if a object was to impale the spot. If the object was to be removed, he would come back to life. If Michael was to go days without consuming flesh, his Regeneration would turn on itself. This means instead of him Regenerating wounds, his body would start to eat itself. He's also incapable of regenerating his bones unless he moves them back into their original position. (example: He breaks his arm, he won't regenerate unless he forces his arm back into its original position then his Regeneration would kick in and fix his arm.)





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Appearance-
(at least 2 GOOD paragraphs describing your character)

Faction- Villain
Birthplace- New York
Mother- Mikayla Harris/73/Nurse/Living/Special/Spontaneous Regeneration
Father- Gabriel Harris/88/Hunter/Deceased/Special/Shape-Shifting
Siblings- None

History-
(at least 4 GOOD paragraphs describing your character's history, birth, important events, to how they got where they are now)

Anything else?- (any other important information we should know?)





Sample RP-
(2 GOOD paragraphs, must be with your character)



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 Re: Michael Harris (WIP)
« Reply #1 on Nov 17, 2010, 2:33pm »

I can already tell you from reading the power that I won't approve this. Please alter the CC and the power choice accordingly. This is a Heroes RP, not an Underworld RP. Thanks.
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 Re: Michael Harris (WIP)
« Reply #2 on Nov 17, 2010, 2:48pm »

I was using the characters appearance. In a way he does have a PB...

And he's not a Vampire, he doesn't suck the blood of animals or people. He consumes the flesh. What exactly is so bad about my power if you would mind explaining?
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 Re: Michael Harris (WIP)
« Reply #3 on Nov 17, 2010, 3:03pm »

You're not using the character appearance because it's against our rules.

You're also not using the power because as Conall said... It's against our rules.

On top of that, Regeneration is "capped" so you can't use it anyway.

The rules are non-negotiable. End of story.

If you don't like them, please find a different site to RP on.
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Conall Saint Albans
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 Re: Michael Harris (WIP)
« Reply #4 on Nov 17, 2010, 3:06pm »

First, all of it. The Heroes-verse doesn't have half-human/half-animal hybrids. Even Conall (who can shapeshift into animals and do essentially the same thing you're describing) doesn't do the whole therianthrope thing because it's not canon to the Heroes-verse. Two, I doubt this character is going to wind up being a new manifest. Three, a literal batman? You really want to go there? Four, read the rules before writing an app. It helps. Really. Five, if you can't respect the rules, tough. Six, the rules are non-negotiable. Don't like them? GTFO.

Does that cover all the bases, or do I need to expound a bit more?
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Durp bio.
Also, that nervous dude who isn't Conall?
Psst.
It's totally Tom.
You know it, I know it, and so does everyone else!
Conall Saint Albans
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Skinwalking / Primal Fear[M:-2000]
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[color=FF00FF]likes to punch goats.[/color][A1i:6]

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Location: New York
Karma: 6
 Re: Michael Harris (WIP)
« Reply #5 on Nov 17, 2010, 3:51pm »

alessia1111 (8:33:14 PM): another thing, that character Connel even goes beyond what my character can do. He literally turns into a animal. My character has only changed slightly into a animal and he can't change back. His character is even more unrealistic then mine.

alessia1111 (8:36:28 PM): yeah i was thinking that too. It seems to be more fun and open then this one >.> My character does fit into the Heroes Verse, Connel or w/.e his name is. His power fits less then my power does in the Heroes Universe.


Yeah, only no since y'know, I actually followed the rules when I applied two years ago with this character, and full shapeshifting is Heroes-canon. Nice passive-aggressive try, though! That other Heroes game sounds like a haven for godmoders and Mary Sues, but whatever floats your boat!

Again, you want to play here? Play by the rules. The other 60 or so members (give or take) have had to follow the same rules. And don't give me that "BUT YOU'RE STIFLING MAH CRE8TIVTY" crap. Conall was my first character on here and surprise! I actually made him fit within the bounds of the rules as have other people like Thomas Kroner. You want to go read an awesome bio with a power that's borderline overpowered? Here. Read it. Guess what? Thomas was a new manifest.

Don't come back and whinge about how, "BUT I WANNA PLAY JACK TEH RIPPAR!11 D:" First character. New manifest. Full stop. Your second character can be Jack the Ripper. First character? Absolutely not. Man-bat? Absolutely not. Don't like our staff ruling? Don't let the door hit your ass on the way out, toots.
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[image]

Durp bio.
Also, that nervous dude who isn't Conall?
Psst.
It's totally Tom.
You know it, I know it, and so does everyone else!
Conall Saint Albans
Elite (Staff)
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Skinwalking / Primal Fear[M:-2000]
member is offline

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[color=FF00FF]likes to punch goats.[/color][A1i:6]

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Joined: May 2009
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,999
Location: New York
Karma: 6
 Re: Michael Harris (WIP)
« Reply #6 on Nov 17, 2010, 7:01pm »

Also, this pic would work better for your CC:

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Durp bio.
Also, that nervous dude who isn't Conall?
Psst.
It's totally Tom.
You know it, I know it, and so does everyone else!
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